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6 years ago Oct 17,2018, 15:02:36 PM

Umbral Choir Making-Of, PT 5: LORE + G2G VOTE!

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Hey everyone,


This blog post is the fourth in a series focusing on the creation process of our upcoming Umbral Choir. We covered the game design aspect, the art, and now the lore to start with our new roll of G2G votes! Ever wondered how the secret sauce was made? Here's your chance to find out!


Today, we’re taking a look at the lore, with some votes! This means watching StoryEngine work, and asking him a few questions...






Can you please introduce yourself and tell us what your role is within the team?


I'm Stephen Gaskell aka StoryEngine, Senior Writer at Amplitude. With Narrative Director, Jeff Spock (Slowhands), I'm responsible for creating in-game texts across all our titles, and generally ensuring all written assets are of sufficient quality. Specifically, on Endless Space 2, I've primarily been working on the world bible, faction quests, dialogue, and UI texts--and helping to storyboard the trailers. In the team, my role is often to be a champion for the lore and story, and make sure the designers' awesome game systems have (semi-plausible) narrative rationales.



What were the inspirations and challenges behind creating the Umbral Choir lore?


Of course, the broad strokes of the Umbral Choir were originally created by our amazing community, so you'd need to ask them where specific inspirations came from! When we formulated the various stages of the faction creation votes, one of our driving goals was to allow the community's inherent creativity to shine, so we kept the choices as wide as possible given the context of the prior votes. The challenge of this approach for the background lore is then taking this community design and ensuring it dovetails with the existing Endless universe. One of the big questions we needed to answer was: if the Umbral Choir is an ancient entity, why is it only emerging onto the galactic stage now? That, and how does a wraith-like faction interact in a material world?!



Could you please walk us through the process of creating the Umbral Choir faction quest?


Before we even considered the Umbral Choir questline, we first spent a lot of time exploring the factions origin, identity, and motivations. The community provided us with hundreds of different ideas, and this formed the creative mulch from which we came up with answers to these questions. We didn't actively take any one single idea, but I would be surprised if our own answers didn't have echoes in many of the community's suggestions. Once we had these answers, the next stage was to storyboard the faction trailer, since it not only requires a long lead time to produce, but is also one of the most important elements for marketing the expansion. Like several other ES2 trailers, the Umbral Choir one focuses on a specific event, and so when it came to the quest it felt natural to continue this story. Without giving away too much, I can say that the questline explores how vastly different lifeforms regard one another, and involved lots of back-and-forth between writers, designers, programmers, and the creative leads. And with four different endings it has a ton of replayability!


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We hope you enjoyed this look behind the scenes at our lore creation! Don't forget that votes are now on for you to decide what the name of the Umbral Choir's home system is!


Now tell us: based on what StoryEngine said, what do you think the faction quest will be about?

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6 years ago
Oct 17, 2018, 3:23:20 PM

World Bible? surely it would be a Galaxy/Universe Bible.


The four different endings has me intrigued. I do hope it has stuff relating to the relations between them, The Endless & The Lost.


Also, someone call CSI Miami we need a zoom and enhance on the monitor behind StoryEngine and calendar? on the wall.

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6 years ago
Oct 17, 2018, 4:07:25 PM

I do hope it is comparable to the UE Questline, or the Riftborn questline. Both Questlines give you very interesting choices. For the UE, you can change to shape your population, get access to unique bonuses and play the UE your way.


It has been quite some time since I played the Riftborn questline, but I do remember that you hade three distinct choices when it came to saving the inhabitants of Coroz, or closing the portal forever. 


I hope that the Umbral Choir will have a similar questline with similar choices. 


Of course, we need a faction which does not rely on others, so pacifists are out of the question. The Umbral Choir survived this long without allying with anyone. We already have 2 pacifists factions with the Unfallen, who were also a passive and hidden race, and the Lumeris who are pacifist but focus on their personal gain in the form of dust. 


The new faction must be one that has been passive, but with good reason, only to emerge and grasp for the entire galaxy. 

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6 years ago
Oct 17, 2018, 5:04:34 PM
sheredynplayer wrote:

I do hope it is comparable to the UE Questline, or the Riftborn questline. Both Questlines give you very interesting choices. For the UE, you can change to shape your population, get access to unique bonuses and play the UE your way.

The UE questline is definitely one of my favourites with the possibility to shape your population in this way; the four different endings already sounds promising for the Umbral Choir.



Now tell us: based on what StoryEngine said, what do you think the faction quest will be about?


permitting the Choir to fulfill their ambitions of ending the suffering in the galaxy.

As the vote text gives away a little in this matter, my guess is that they found the physical universe and it´s inhabitants probably by accident and interpreted their current state as a form of suffering, kicking off the quest by their decision to do something about it. Given that their way of being is vastly different, they might see their very physical existence as a form of deformation/problem that needs to be solved.


Their solution may either be transformation, guidance (if it is more their behavior they see as troublesome) or eradication; either way it´s going to be sneaky and less direct going by the faction description and prior vote results. In either way i assume it will include a good amount of trying to understand their weird ways of physical existence.


 Maybe the concrete method or  simply giving up on trying to change/destroy them might be the final choice/ending for their questline.

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6 years ago
Oct 17, 2018, 5:53:31 PM

UE, riftborn and vaulters are the most intredting quest in terme of choice.


About the unbral choir, I juste hope it won't be too similar of riftborn (spirit from another world who want to understand the physical world).

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6 years ago
Oct 17, 2018, 6:29:45 PM

My guess is that the event that brought them to notice and interact with the Endless galaxy was the dust bomb in one of the main game trailers - the same that tore a hole into, and started corrupting, the Riftborn's universe.


If that is the case, then kudos to the story team - I like seeing the (multiverse?) fleshed out more, showing that the game setting is not just limited to one realm of existence.


Edit: Oh, and my bet is that the Umbral Choir are the second Religious faction. Their goal of "ending the suffering in the galaxy" is a very religious one.

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Oct 17, 2018, 6:47:02 PM
Blandersnatching wrote:

My guess is that the event that brought them to notice and interact with the Endless galaxy was the dust bomb in one of the main game trailers - the same that tore a hole into, and started corrupting, the Riftborn's universe.


If that is the case, then kudos to the story team - I like seeing the (multiverse?) fleshed out more, showing that the game setting is not just limited to one realm of existence.


Edit: Oh, and my bet is that the Umbral Choir are the second Religious faction. Their goal of "ending the suffering in the galaxy" is a very religious one.

Religious sounds like the proper ideology for them. Indoctrinating lesser physical beings into believing that their material lives are nothing compared to an "incorporeal" afterlife sounds like something that could fit with the infiltration/subterfuge/manipulative theme they have.

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6 years ago
Oct 21, 2018, 5:57:30 AM

    The questline could have some relation of connecting their world to the material world permanently so there is no need for being locked in their current state. Like the Riftborn, they do not actually belong in this universe so the goal should have some focus on making connections so the Umbral Choir can have a "physical" form. Or the entire quest line could just be focused on data gathering and survivng. 

     I don't know, all that is circling my head is the Pearls from te movie Valerian and how the lived within a city unknown and gathering knowledge at the same time while focused on this goal of bringing back what they want. 

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6 years ago
Oct 23, 2018, 12:50:11 AM

I already have an idea out, but I wish I saw this stuff sooner! My idea is that the Umbral Choir originated from a sentient planet that was destroyed.  On the vote page, it says that the Choir's ambition is to end "the suffering in the galaxy. " If they are fractions of a sentient planet, could it be that the wish for all planets to prosper; to be safe from the same fate as Auriga, the only confirmed sentient planet in the Endless universe?

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6 years ago
Oct 23, 2018, 8:28:06 AM
Sublustris wrote:

Second religious faction was Hissho

Not exactly.  They have a religious minor pop and the ability to lean towrds religion, but the Hissho are quite clearly a military faction.


Besides, "Umbral Choir" already has a religious tone to it.

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6 years ago
Oct 24, 2018, 1:37:33 PM

A religious type quest? Good, we could use another religious faction.

I wonder what the minor pop will be?

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6 years ago
Oct 29, 2018, 8:52:59 AM
Leafy503 wrote:

A religious type quest? Good, we could use another religious faction.

I wonder what the minor pop will be?

Maybe a bodiless Riftborn? =)

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6 years ago
Nov 5, 2018, 3:25:53 AM

Personally I assumed they were servants of the Lost. Specifically the servants of the 4 eyed one who comes up in most situations of the game. They may have a similar goal to the Heretic, when it comes to righting wrongs and ending the suffering of the universe. The questions of free-will and consequence are also interesting since they are said to be machievllian.  Perhaps relating to the war the ended, the endless as well given that it was all about the virtual and physical(concrete) realms of their people.


They may have 4 endings if each of the 4 "eyes" is actually one of the lost. If each Lost has a physical manifestation like Auriga anyway.

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