Logo Platform
logo amplifiers simplified

Umbral Choir Prologue try (Fanfic?)

Reply
Copied to clipboard!
6 years ago
Dec 5, 2018, 5:00:41 PM

Hello there, since i don't post that often on the forum, apologize if i post it in the wrong section. And sorry for a very bad english.


Let's start so. I really love the idea of the Umbral Choir, and throughout the votes, i began to imagine them, and some of their interaction. I have some ideas.... But i'm not a developper so, i will set it there, if you love it. I write it in english, so it's possble that some translation are bad, or the text are a bit clunky (cause i'm not an english man). I wrote this like this was the "prologue cinematic" of the faction, but maybe a little short. Be free to comment. 


As a note, if some want the Original version ( french) feel free to ask. I will edit there when i'll get the time.


And now, imagine the cinematic.


Numerous are the galaxy sounds.

Many are indistinguishable for inferior species. Not for us.

The symphony of our galaxy unified, becoming a perfect score. 


But the last step guide us in this new galaxy.


The young species cacophony erodes some gracious notes of the old ones. But elders are against punctual improvisation. Anyway, a sound guide us.


We learn from stars gurgle, war hubbub and machination silence. While we stay invisible, hidden in their shadows roar, we compose a new symphony.

0Send private message
6 years ago
Feb 8, 2019, 7:11:14 PM

Doesn't really fit the writing, but as you said English isn't your native language. Good effort

0Send private message
6 years ago
Aug 5, 2019, 3:27:22 PM

I myself have an idea for Umbral Choir, regarding their interaction with small fractions, if only if not with all fractions at once. You can get acquainted with my ideas through my profile in the "Ideas" section. I would like to know someone else's opinion.

0Send private message
?

Click here to login

Reply
Comment

Characters : 0
No results
0Send private message