Hi, just some minor mistakes in English with Max's biography, nothing serious.

"Max is eternally optimistic, mostly because he is to terrified of where he is to think about it seriously. He will always be looking to profit from a situation -- get extra loot, take one more object, spend less money, etc. -- even if it puts him in a bad (risky) position or earns angry comments from his heroes."

The sections in bold don't make sense, are redundant, or use bad grammar. Maybe you were after something like:



"Max is always cracking jokes and laughing the moment away. Mostly because he is too terrified of what he might think about were he to take things seriously. Somewhat of a rogue, he is always looking to profit from a situation -- gain extra loot, take one more object, save money, etc. -- even if it puts him in a risky position, or earns the ire of his fellow companions."

Yeah, I noticed this as a bit odd as well. Then I forgot to post about it