I may get a few things wrong, but I tried my best, I have around 20 hours or so of gameplay, no idea why my steam doesn't update.

It's a pretty good video, reading the comments from devildogff on your youtube page you've already got the idea that going into a little more detail about fidsi and influence etc. would help as well as naming them correctly. Talking just a little slower so the watcher don't get lost amongst everything going on in the game is a plus and if it's too long just break it down into parts. Other than that your mic was a little loud so it was distorting your voice through my earbuds.

Overall a decent straightforward overview. It'll be cool if you make more videos as you learn because there aren't that many LPers