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No problem with your structure. Maybe you could beef up the narrative part? For the moment there's the gameplay bit of your event, but not much of the substance that would make it compelling. :)
Thanks for the feedback. I was thinking about a story. The problem is that the story I had in mind didn't fit the criteria. I have come up with with an alternative though.
I edited my post after suggestions from Frogsquadron, I just wanted to know if any additional changes need to be made to qualify, will the requests be posted here or at the new forum?
The contest is still going forward. However, we will now ask you to make your submission over here, where people will be directly able to comment on them!
The deadline is this Friday, at noon. We'll update you guys on social media to keep everyone informed!
I don't think we can afford creating a whole new tech line specifically for this event. However, it could be possible to fit this within the current tech tree. I will have to ask quaedam how we can work with this idea and get back to you. (Not sure about some of the objectives either. We'll see! :) )
Should I unlock a TYPE of support module on ships? OR can I add a support module to all the ships in the fleet (this too much?)
Also are there fleet technologies? Like the ones in ES1 that added tonnage to ships etc? or should I make that a random Industrial tech unlock?
There is no tonnage/capacity or anything, but there are fleet-related technologies. In general, I'd recommend you just suggest something and we'll adapt it as close as we can. :)
Objective 4: (Your production must be >(x) to choose this option)
Cool idea, but prerequisites to choosing an objective are a bit too restrictive, so we'll be doing without them.
Your quest is pretty neat and not much to say on issues it has, except the following two:
- You offer 3 choices, one in chapter 1, and two in chapter 3. Even if the player is effectively confronted to only two of these, that's still one too many for the boundaries of this event. :p
- "+ Diplomatic relations increase" with another non-AI faction would be problematic (there is no way of forcing a human player to like your empire), so +Influence or an improvement with a Minor Faction would be a more suitable alternative. :)
duo_ wrote: i never considered using a minor faction because i don't know how minor faction interaction would look like. also i liked the consequences and physiological questions that this posed and i tried to set the quest up so that while some things changed the plot went back to were it started. how about this can i submit another version in the same post, only one could be entered but both could be viewed to see which it better?
If you are looking for feedback from others, you can have both versions in one post, but eventually before next Wednesday you'll have to make a choice, as we won't make it for you. :)
EndlessCrashes wrote: Perfidious Probes: Part 1
Amplitude, please let me know I my quest has any issues and I will try to fix them. Thanks! :D
Oh boy, that's a dramatic turn of events! However, there are a few issues with your quest. Nothing that can't be changed, but these probably mean we explained things in a limited manner.
Quests are, like in Endless Legend, things that you have to want to progress through, otherwise they'll just sit in your quest book and go unheeded, simply because the risk for them to mess up your life in a big way is too strong. We want quests to be engaging, and for players to want an extra chance of doing something cool. There is potential with yours, but we gotta take a look at these first:
- Your quests has one choice to make, but absolutely no objectives to accomplish. Objectives are "go there with a fleet" or "get at least 1000 Science per turn for 5 turns" or "build a ship" or "colonize a planet" or "assign a Hero there", etc. Things that actually lead the player to do an action. Choices are fine, but they should be between "investigate the threat while preparing for anything [BuildtwoSciencebuildingsandatleast3militaryships]" and "prepare for peace [Buildapprovalimprovementsandenactatrade-favoringlaw]", not "prepare for peace [clickthatchoice]" or "prepare for war [clickthatotherchoice]", because then it requires no investment on your part. :)
- Your rewards are mostly effects, not rewards. See this post by quaedam for an explanation (I have to say I got her to write it because it can be tricky to wrap your head around the difference, but there's one!)
- You get to ally with another empire without giving them a choice. That is a bit of a problem as this quest wouldn't allow the other player a choice, which would be an issue in multiplayer!
- The end result is super hyper mega dramatic. If I got the bad ending as a player, I'd just let the quest sit in my quest log and never want to complete it again, so just not make a choice in the first place. A pity! :)
(but we like any and all references to sci-fan, historical fiction, even actual history and pop culture, just to make that clear!)
The first question we asked you to answer in order to narrow down the scope of the contest was: what type of quest do you want to create? The vote was clear, all you space explorers were interested in creating a Solo quest!
Because a solo quest involves a little less interaction and should present fewer implementation challenges than co-op, we've decided to give you more leeway, with a quest comprising up to three chapters. What's a chapter? A chapter is basically a step, it has objectives that you need to accomplish, sometimes gives you choices. Let's look at an example:
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Title
The Price of Freedom
Description
"In the midst of a small asteroid belt, your scouts have discovered a tiny, abandoned space station. You find no clue as to the identity of its creators, but as your ships approach, you discover that the station is repeatedly broadcasting a single, cryptic, message.
The message is a crude holographic star chart, indicating a distant point in the galaxy. The point is labelled "Free Rocks Here."
Free rocks here?"
Objective01
Reveal the indicated Node.
Outcome
You've reached the location marked on the map. As promised, there are free rocks available. Hooray?
Gain 10 Titanium
Title
The Price of Freedom: Part 2
Description
"While loading up on free rocks, your crew decrypted another signal--this time originating from a nearby barren planet. Take Rocks And Go Away, it reads.
Something tells you not to stick your nose where it doesn't belong, but your scanners are picking up strange signs of activity on the planet. Perhaps you owe it to your crew to find out who these mysterious rock philantropists are."
Objective02
Send an Expedition to the indicated Curiosity on [targetplanet]… if you think it right.
Outcome
Searching the planet has proved rewarding: you find a small cache of Dust, but the barren landscape appears to hold nothing else of interest.
Gain 200 Dust
Title
The Price of Freedom: Part 3
Description
"As your expedition party prepares to leave, your camp is finally approached--by a solitary, eight-foot-tall Plume. As your men and women gather around, the friendly Plume reveals that the planet is home to a vast subterranean population of Plumes, only a decade or two into spaceflight. He explains the largest ecological issue facing their generation: they believe that the growing population of Plumes is making the planet too heavy, causing it to inch closer to the sun. Plume climate-change activists are urging for increased offloading of the planet's heaviest rocks.
Before he can finish, a loud rumbling heralds the arrival of more Plumes--and these don't seem nearly as friendly.
"Get off... my… PLANET!" bellows the leader. He hefts a large boulder and hurls it at you, scattering your crew."
Objective03
Survive the battle… if you can!
Outcome
Your forces have slain a few of the most aggressive Plumes and driven off the rest, but your friendly Plume seems to have slipped away in the confusion. You depart the planet in a pensive mood, your ship laden with an extremely heavy "metal thing" that your friendly Plume left you as a parting gift.
Gain 150 Hyperium
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This is a fairly straightforward type of quest, with linear narration. You can choose other types of scenarios, up to a limit of 2 choices per chapter in 2 chapters.
The event above follows the narrative structure of the picture on the left.
YOUR SUBMISSION MUST HAVE
A name (50 characters max). The name will be the same from one chapter of the quest to the other, like Event X, Event X Part 2, etc.
A description (500 characters max).
Up to three chapters, comprised of only one step (objective) each
An objective, or a choice between two objectives to accomplish per chapter. The objective is a descriptive text ("Explore planet X") (150 characters max per objective). You have up to a limit of 2 choices per chapter in 2 chapters.
A description for the outcome of each objective, with a target and duration if applicable (instant, or X turns; on hero, system, planet, fleet, empire, etc.), eg: +X approval on System for 10 turns (250 characters max)
Please provide a graphical representation of your event showing its narrative structure. Feel free to inspire yourself from the two structures shared above. It doesn't need to be pretty, we just want to make sure we don't misunderstand what's going on. :)
GUIDELINES & ADVICE
You are limited to one submission. Please also note that we will only accept submissions posted in English.
If you want to modify your submission, please edit your post (don't repost your submission)
This quest can have several possible outcomes. If you offer several outcomes, make sure there isn't an obvious "worse" choice!
KEEP THE CHAPTERS AS SIMPLE AS POSSIBLE! If your quest is convoluted because you're trying to fit in an 8 chapters quest in 3 chapters, it won't work.
It's a solo quest. Outcomes should only involve the recipient of the quest (no "eliminate X population on random enemy system").
Outcomes should be limited to one per step of the quest. Find what your event is about and make it count.
You cannot participate if you have already won a previous Endless Space 2 creation contest. The list of winners so far is o0ber and Epikuros. Feel free to give feedback on one another's events!
DEADLINE
Submit your ideas before June 22nd. We’ll be closing the thread at midday (CEST). We will then put all submissions that meet the required criteria to a multi-entry vote (where you can support several ideas), from which the three most popular will be selected for the G2G vote.
PRIZE
The lucky winner will receive the following:
Your name in the game credits.
An Endless Space 2 t-shirt that will be the envy of your friends.
Two copies of the game when it comes to Early Access, for you and a friend!
Please note that Amplitude reserves the right to modify the proposals and will work with the winners to finalize the design and adapt it to development constraints. Modifications might affect descriptions, scope or outcomes.
Good luck to everyone!
EDIT : Answering questions on the contest:
HappyHead wrote: Can there be an element of chance in one of the chapters? Like, say there's a coin toss in the very first chapter and the result leads down one of two different paths.
Yes, you can have an element of chance. :)
Lynx_gnt wrote: So, objectives are not supposed to be only "do something / sometime / somewhere / somehow", but player can just choose between two options? (like a Dilemma)
There can be options, but these options lead to something that the player has to accomplish. In this case, for instance, the objective to accomplish is paying something, which could lead to having to gather said resources, etc. In general if there's an element in your quest you're not sure about, just put the question at the end of your message and we'll try to address it ASAP. :)
quaedam wrote: Hey guys ;D Some clarifications on differences between Quests and Events. As you know, Quests have objectives, which means that the player needs to do something to complete the quest, contrarily to Events, where the player can only suffer the effects.
About Effects and Rewards: this is probably the most confusing part. Events, indeed, have effects: increase or decrease FIDSI production, spawn an enemy fleet, immobilize a fleet, etc.
Quests however, have rewards: Because the player completed an objective, they receive something (interesting and useful preferably :D ) This something has no “duration” (contrary to the effects :) and the player is able to decide where and when they want to use this reward.
Some examples: •Technology •Strategic Resources •Luxury Resources •Ship modules (support/defense/attack) •Star System Improvements/ Buildings or Wonders •Armies •Hero Skills (very rare) •Hero Modules •Dust •Influence points •Diplomatic relations increase
Frogsquadron wrote: Thematically however, we might change the story's setting to be that of a Minor Faction asking for help, or something else, as the events depicted in your quest have far-reaching consequences in terms of plot (city levelled by an asteroid, civil war..) but no bearing on gameplay (no bad stuff of any kind). I could see this more easily happening to a neighboring Minor Faction since in terms of gameplay you are more detached from events happening in their society.
i never considered using a minor faction because i don't know how minor faction interaction would look like. also i liked the consequences and physiological questions that this posed and i tried to set the quest up so that while some things changed the plot went back to were it started. how about this can i submit another version in the same post, only one could be entered but both could be viewed to see which it better?
You could fairly easily rework this quest into something keeping most of the plot intact, and just doing away with the seed gameplay idea. If you want to keep the original idea, you can put it in a spoiler tag so it doesn't take up space.
Or make a new submission in a new post, the choice is yours. :)
Some clarifications on differences between Quests and Events.
As you know, Quests have objectives, which means that the player needs to do something to complete the quest, contrarily to Events, where the player can only suffer the effects.
About Effects and Rewards: this is probably the most confusing part.
Events, indeed, have effects: increase or decrease FIDSI production, spawn an enemy fleet, immobilize a fleet, etc.
Quests however, have rewards:
Because the player completed an objective, they receive something (interesting and useful preferably :D )
This something has no “duration” (contrary to the effects :) and the player is able to decide where and when they want to use this reward.
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