Bumping this to remind people that they have to submit their entries by e-mail for them to be registered, as anything only present on this thread will not be accepted.

Moreover, entries will be presented in order of submissions, so if you want one of the first spots, get yours in early!

Digitalhawk96 wrote:

So I caught a cold so I have been rather sore around the head region today but I managed to bring the warfare Unfallen to a standard im happy with; there might be a few small details here and there but this is it.

Here we go:

Ill be sending off my submission tomorrow after scanning everything in and editing it into the correct format. 

Edit: there is a second leg but only a sliver is visable, if I choose to I could have had more "legs", but two legs will be fine. I will probably not be drawing for the next couple of days since I have to work on a literay review on High Lift devices, it has a little more priority.

radlawnmower wrote:

Clearly I'm not the only one who had the idea to get feedback from this thread, but I would really appreciate it regardless. Please tell me which citizen design you like best and why or why not. Thanks again and best of luck to everyone in the competition, your entries look great!

Oh, and the arms on design 1 are supposed to have similar tendril connections that the legs do, but I kind of forgot. Feel kind of silly know.

I'd pick number 2. It looks more alien and unique! Number 1 seems a little too humanoid imo, but they both look amazing. :o

Mithrill wrote:

A little more of my draws:

The Protector:

An interesting design there, what exactly is within that thing, a giant seed or a crystal?  Perhaps a description would help us understand it better. 

uriak wrote:

Still not done :( I'm kinda slowly tweaking details on the ship (mainly)

Notably this little bugger, I can't decide if I'm making an assaut craft or the smallest vessel (civilian )

I'm enjoying your work quite a bit. Keep it coming!

I really like the ideas that involve vines and tendrils more so than the bulky brown tree trunk designs. Ent-like designs seem to be a bit overused in fantasy. Also have the devs specified that the designs need to be humanoid? I think it'd be more interesting if The Unfallen weren't so human shaped. If they use spores to force truce maybe they could be more mushroom like. Having said that, there definitely have been some cool designs so far.

radlawnmower wrote:

Clearly I'm not the only one who had the idea to get feedback from this thread, but I would really appreciate it regardless. Please tell me which citizen design you like best and why or why not. Thanks again and best of luck to everyone in the competition, your entries look great!

Oh, and the arms on design 1 are supposed to have similar tendril connections that the legs do, but I kind of forgot. Feel kind of silly know.

I also think that we should try not to make them too humanoid but I really liked number 1, I'd say go for that because it is really cool! Also, if the Unfallen can shape themselves to become ships they could also try to look more humanoid for diplomacy reasons!

I started re-doing my military and civilian entries to make them look more unique (or at least as unique as I can make them). I think this preliminary sketch turned out pretty decent.

It's still a work in progress but I think it's a good start.

radlawnmower wrote:

I would go with design 2. Nb 1 looks too human shaped for me liking, that's just personal preferences though. Nb 2 reminds me of some giants from Nausicaä or Hyper Light Drifter. You know these huling monstrosities.

Wheyloffle wrote:

The Spacecraft

I like this sleek and elegant design. Especially the idea of bending metal around the bio strucutre. This is a good deviation from the "trunks in space". 

BlackBird1696 wrote:

Is this cape like structure some leafes?  I can imagine some motions on it, a head twitching, some bending on the trunk part, the leafes moving bye the wind. Like the leader animations in EL. Good work.

TangerineMantis wrote:

I really like the ideas that involve vines and tendrils more so than the bulky brown tree trunk designs. Ent-like designs seem to be a bit overused in fantasy. Also have the devs specified that the designs need to be humanoid? I think it'd be more interesting if The Unfallen weren't so human shaped. If they use spores to force truce maybe they could be more mushroom like. Having said that, there definitely have been some cool designs so far.

We haven't specified much, and especially not the shape.

I have a question related to the descriptions of the pictures : is it possible to fuse the descriptions of the soldier and of the civilian to obtain one description of 100 words instead of two of 50 words ?

The description says up to 50 word per character and ship , doesn't seem it mandates how those words are to arranged, unless they have a specific presentation in mind ?

uriak wrote:

The description says up to 50 word per character and ship , doesn't seem it mandates how those words are to arranged, unless they have a specific presentation in mind ?

I know but I want to be sure : it would be a shame if my submission were deleted because of a detail like this.