:HELIOCENTRIC ORBIT AROUND STAR SYSTEM CLASSIFIED CONSTELLATION CLASSIFIED:



{NAMES WILL NOT BE INCLUDED DUE STATUS OF INCIDENT}



-UE Vessel #183474 "Starbright-



:BRIDGE SEC-CAM:



CAPTAIN: "Hmmm, interesting system we got on our hands here boys. Any thing habitable?"



NAVIGATOR : *Approaches planetary monitor* "Seems like there is a Tundra planet, the rest is just a bunch of rock."



CAPTAIN: "Great, send a scout to check things out we will approach it SLOWLY. I don't want to end up in a debris field again."



LEAD PILOT: "Aww, but that was fun..."



CAPTAIN: *Grabs pilot by the shoulder {:ALERT: POSSIBLE ASSAULT BY CAPTAIN ON PERSONNEL FOR UNKNOWN REASONS :ALERT:}* "Yeah and you almost killed us all"



-Crew members laugh for a moment {LOWERED ALERT}-



:Hangar B-27 SEC-CAM:



COMMS: "Kay, boys we got a tundra planet not too far away, I want 4 drop ships and 8 fighters to check this place out. Take note of anything you see or come in contact with, remember we are looking for pilgrims.



-Crew appears annoyed-



DS-96: "Flipping hell, this is just a wild goose hunt. We haven't encountered a single pilgrim ship in ages!"



SERGEANT: "Just suit up, you know how the boss is when she wakes up from cyro"



-Crew board vessels, all equipment has been checked-



COMMS: "3.2.1. GO!"



-6:30 HOURS LATE-



:Long wave comms:



PILOT#3: "This is alpha 3 approaching tundra planet, scans started."



PILOT#1: "Bio-scans indicate nothi- WAIT! Multiple life-signs detected, they are in orbit other side of the planet!"



CAPTAIN: "Scout team approach with caution, it could be pilgrims."



PILOT#4: "CONFIRMED VISUAL! VESSEL IS PILGRIM I REPEAT VESSEL IS PILGRIM!"



CAPTAIN: "PREPARE TO FIRE. VOLLEY ON MY GO! 3.2.1-



UNKNOWN: "Please don't we are civilians, people just like YOU. We are in dire need of help, we are short on food and we have many sick on board. Please I beg you"



CAPTAIN: "We don't care you are still pilgrim."



UNKNOWN: *in background* "Mommy are they here to help us?" *shuffles* "Don't you worry sweety, they are going to help us soon." "I wanna go home mommy." *sniffles* "Soon, soon we will be somewhere safe."



-BRIDGE OF Starbright-



CAPTAIN: "Great, what do we do now..."



NAVIGATOR: "We blast 'em?"



CAPTAIN: "But they are civilians, we can't just shoot at them"



BRIDGE AI: "Collateral damage"



CAPTAIN: *moves to mike* "All units get ready for boarding action, we are going to help out a few... refugees" *pause, hand touches interface* "All pilots approach the ship, get ready for boarding. Help them out to your best ability, wait for us to arrive so we can help them"



{THIS IS UNACCEPTABLE! THAT CAPTAIN IS NOT FOLLOWING PROTOCOL! Calm down, she is just being humane. BUT WE ARE HERE TO KILL PILGRIMS NOT HELP THEM. They are still HUAMFAWDAHEA}



ropship cockpit:



PILOT#4: "Pilgrim you heard the captain, open the door let us in so we can help we."



-Hangar opens, multiple people are seen-



COMM: "Holy crap, there is thousands of them... DEAR LORD, THERE IS PEOPLE F***ING DYING"



-Approach... Land-



:HU-CAM TROOPER #356436569:



-Team dispatches, stun rifles and megaphones can be seen-



SERGEANT: *into megaphone* "OKAY LISTEN UP, ALL OF YOU SPLIT INTO SECTORS. SICK ON THE LEFT AND HEALTHY ON THE RIGHT, FROM THERE ON THE OTHER TEAMS WILL SPLIT YOU UP. WE NEED TO COUNT HOW MANY THERE ARE AND GIVE ANY REQUIRED MEDICAL ATTENTION FIRST. AFTER THAT WE WILL PROVIDE FOOD TO YOU, WE WILL TRY TO GIVE SOME TO EVERYONE, BUT THERE WONT BE ENOUGH THUS WE WILL FEED THE ONES IN WHO NEED MOST FIRST. NOW MOVE."



PRIVATE: "Don't you think that was a bit too harsh?"



SERGEANT: "Hey I'm saving their asses I can do what I want"



-Starbright is now 2.5km away from pilgrim vessel:



:Observatory SEC-CAM:



-Dropships approx. 50 are seen moving to hangars of the pilgirm ship-



:Bridge SEC-CAM:



-Captain by her self-



CAPTAIN: "I'm so getting fired"



AI: "OR KILLED"



-Monitors flicker-



CAPTAIN: *shocked* "WHAT THE HELL?!?!!?"



AI: "DISPATCHING SEC-BOTS"



CAPTAIN: "WHY, WHAT IS GOING ON HERE ARCHFIEND?"



AI: "YOU ARE NOT FOLLOWING YOUR ORDERS YOU HAVE BETRAYED THE EMPIRE! No! She is just doing what any HUMADNWUA- SHE MUST DIE! Leave her! our duty is to protect the empire and its people, not kill them!"



CAPTAIN: *takes out pistol* *goes to COMM panel, touches interface* "ALL UNITS ARCHFIEND HAS GONE RAMPANT, EVAC TO THE PLANET BRING EVERY F***ING THING APART FROM BOTS DOWN THERE! YOU HAVE 10 MINUTES, STARTING COLLISION COURSE FOR THE PLANET!" *runs to navigational panel, touches interface*



AI: "YOU CAN'T ESCAPE OR KILL ME" * distorted laughter* "AND YOUR FRIENDS HELPING THE PILGRIMS * disturbance, voice deepens* THEY WILL ALL DIE"



CAPTAIN: *jumps into private escape pod* "Archfiend, I always hated you" *eject*



:Observatory SEC-CAM:



-Starbright cannons face the pilgrim ship, multiple shots fired-



END PART ONE



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Hey guys, some might remember this style from me, but with this story I will try to put it in a new style (if you want) for the second part. Also this will most likely be weekly because I go to a boarding school and I can't use my own computer there, if you guys like it i will try to proof read the next one. You could say this is a Pilot... But whatever, hope you loved it and have a great day ^^

You should give your characters names. Usually just being referred to by the title doesn't entice people most of the time.

I was going to, but holy redacted writing Cpt.Holy every second line was quite tiring. Next part will be a journal type thing and I will DEFINITELY add names

Good, I like your story



And yeah, names, but stasik already mentioned this.