I'm trying to improve my writing skills so to make my post easier to read and thus overall more useful. I wonder how you for example would rewrite this post to be more readable?

Nothing really, that's a great post. You do a good job maintaining a pleasant text to whitespace ratio, outlining major sections and highlighting key words with bold, and it has a clear thesis, methods, and conclusion. Very readable, very well done.

While your post is well formatted, I would recommend getting a spellchecker or grammar assistance. The post is well laid out just with many incorrect spellings and improper sentence format.

brubie wrote:

While your post is well formatted, I would recommend getting a spellchecker or grammar assistance. The post is well laid out just with many incorrect spellings and improper sentence format.

I did write it using Google document.

I agree with Shasho, your posts are always really readable. As a non native speaker myself, I cannot blame you for doing occasional mistakes. And again, everything is always crystal clear and well organized. So thank you for putting this great amount of efforts and giving us well developped and argumented feedbacks!

Have a nice weekend !^^

Ben

It was 7 months since I created this thread.

JoanCornishOj wrote:

For starters, you should develop a catchy headline that stands out from the rest and grabs the reader's attention instantly. The first two or three sentences are just as important. I couldn't figure out how to achieve this in a college essay until I contacted medical editing services. Entrance essays are extremely important because it's a student's chance to really talk directly to the admissions committee. If you go to be heard and achieve your goal, writing text is half the battle. The second half is to design it competently and informatively. The best texts are written in a lively language, cleared of jargon and unnecessary terms.

Thanks, but this post was many months ago and I'm not sure I'll write anything here anymore as the last time I made a thread was many months ago.