<LocalizationPair Name="%EmpirePlanSimulationDescription">Click here to do a simulation of your next Empire Plan (it is currently locked)/</LocalizationPair>

Should end with a . not a /

<LocalizationPair Name="%OnlyMadFairiesOnCityTooltipEffect">Wild  Walkers hero with Roads of Dust item equipped must be city governor</LocalizationPair>

Double space in 'Wild Walker'

  <LocalizationPair Name="%WorldGeneratorOptionTopographyMountainousDescription">Mountainous landscape (many elevation changes). Elevations often as high as 7. Manyridges and cliffs, all with maximum height of 4. Many rivers, few lakes.</LocalizationPair>

No space in 'Manyridges'

Spelling mistakes from 1.5.0:

<LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionMyEmpireLostNavalRegionControlDuringWarFeedbackNeutral_Occurrence1_RovingClans">Why would you #F3EAD8#force us to lose a naval regiony#REVERT#? We do understand the value of these things.</LocalizationPair>

Region

<LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionCityTakenFromEnemyFeedbackPositive_Occurrence1_Cultists">You have #F3EAD8#taken an enemy city#REVERT#; we praise your wisdom which aligns with the needs of the Queeen.</LocalizationPair>

Queen

<LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionAtWarWithMyAllyFeedbackNegative_Occurrence1_Drakkens">You are at #F3EAD8#war with our ally#REVERT#! This is a heinous act of barabarism.</LocalizationPair>

Barbarism

<LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionCityTakenFromAllyFeedbackNegative_Occurrence1_Drakkens">You have committed a barabaric act of war by #F3EAD8#taking an allied city#REVERT#!</LocalizationPair>

Barbaric

<LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionOtherEmpireLeadNavalMilitaryPowerFeedbackPositive_Occurrence1_Mezari">You have the #F3EAD8#most powerful navy#REVERT#, but we think rou'll be smart about it.</LocalizationPair>

<LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionOtherEmpireLeadNavalMilitaryPowerFeedbackPositive_Occurrence1_Vaulters">You have the #F3EAD8#most powerful navy#REVERT#, but we think rou'll be smart about it.</LocalizationPair>

You'll

<LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionMyEmpireLeadNavalMilitaryPowerFeedbackNegative_Occurrence1_Necrophages">The hive has the #F3EAD8#most powerful navy#REVERT#, and we ar eager to demonstrate it on you.</LocalizationPair>

Are (also, shouldn't hive be capitalized?)

<LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionBlackSpotAcknowledged_RageWizards">You #F3EAD8#have placed a Black Spot on us#REVERT#. We accpet the pain, but not the sentiment.</LocalizationPair>

Accept

<LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionEliminatedEnemyFeedbackPositive_Occurrence1_BrokenLords">Your #F3EAD8#elimination of our enemy#REVERT# leaves us in youir debt.</LocalizationPair>

Your

<LocalizationPair Name="%SideQuestNavalInteract#0025Objective">Find the Unique Facility indicated on the old mariner's map. These Facilites contain marvels of greater value than standard Fortress tiles.</LocalizationPair>

Facilities

<LocalizationPair Name="%SideQuestNavalInteract#0022Description">The tribe that has settled comfortably in these ruins is unhappy with their ugly new ovelords. They don't like their noisy habits, blasphemous forms of worship, and the casual and disgusting way they dispose of their waste. they also find them repulsively ugly, but that is a more subjective issue.

If you can resolve the problem by driving them out, the Erycis would be happy to see a more agreeable people -- like yours -- take their place.</LocalizationPair>

Overlords

<LocalizationPair Name="%SideQuestNavalInteract#0019Outcome">The objects are taken carefully, amid awed whipsers and genuflections. You have greatly impressed the inhabitants of the Fortress, who show their appreciation with some useful technology. Now that is an unexpected gift!</LocalizationPair>

Whispers

<LocalizationPair Name="%SideQuestNavalInteract#0018Description">It all seemed too obvious. A scout finds a ruined Bathysphere, notes that it is no longer in working order, and calls upon the ship to send divers and loot it.
Sadly she was a better scout than mechanic, and the Bathsyphere is anything but ruined. It is part of an undersea pirate cooperative, and all of a sudden your well-meaning scout and the fleet she was posted to are under attack!</LocalizationPair>

Bathysphere

<LocalizationPair Name="%SideQuestNavalInteract#0006Description">The Fomorians in the Fortress complain of feast and famine, of nets bursting with fish and yet weeks when the juciest bait and chum bring nothing. Should you show that the bounties of Auriga are at your beck and call, that your people never want for a full belly, they will view you with almost god-like reverence. </LocalizationPair>

Juiciest (also extra space at the end of description)

<LocalizationPair Name="%SideQuestNavalInteract#0003Description">The more you sail the waters, the more you realize you are gliding on a thin surface above deep and unfathomable mysteries. Are there lost kingdoms, unseakable horrors, or both?
Gnarled deckhands, skilled wrights, and sunburned pirates speak of an ancient object, lying in a place shrouded in mystery and death, that may teach you more about what lurks beneath you.
It may be dangerous, but what is life without a bit of risk?</LocalizationPair>

Unspeakable

<LocalizationPair Name="%SideQuestNavalTalk#0003-Step2">You find a wreck, bodies... and pirates! They murdered the lost Formorians and now your quest is for justice -- or vengeance.</LocalizationPair>

Fomorians

<LocalizationPair Name="%MainQuestSeaDemons-Chapter8Description">Morgwar exults. Others are weak, without purpose; kill each other for Dust. Little minds thinking little thoughts. No vision. No intent.

Only Morgawr sees world as one world, people as one mind. Only Morgawr can use one great mind to control many small ones. Only Morgawr will prevail. See last step to freedom, last chain to break. Last vestige of evil tools of the Jailers.

Jailers feared Morgawr great intent, Morgawr mind. Jailers were not stupid. Jailers created Dampening Wave; an engine driven by tides and currents to suppress Morgawr thoughts, limit Morgawr movements.

Fortresses and Jailers' beasts are all part of Dampening Wave. Must control them, breach them, make the engines turn through seasons and pry out their secrets with Dust.

Freedom will be expensive, painful, long. But there is no other goal. There is no other reason to exist.

Freedom.</LocalizationPair>

Morgawr

Line 10787:   <LocalizationPair Name="%UnitProfileSeaDemonsHero2Description">As one of the many bizarre mutations that characterize the Morgawr population, Strio has growths that clearly indicate genetic material of conch or nautilus shells. During his early years he learned that these shells, if filled with air, could be made to create sonic vibrations of most unusual -- and sometimes pleasing -- frequencies. When communes are full of Morgawr in deep thought, or even merely trading news, Strio will often create musical counterparts to soothe listeners, make them vulnerable to suggestions, or even enrage them if it suits him. When defending he will play a  series of tones that he refers to as the "Song of the Morgawr", designed to instill morale in his own troops while confusing the enemy. Music is a powerful force, and when tied to Morgawr intent it can be a very unpleasant weapon.</LocalizationPair>

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Line 10792:   <LocalizationPair Name="%UnitProfileSeaDemonsHero3Description">The Morgawr are a telepathic society that identifies individuals by their minds, and as such has little need for names. Sclera, however, has held subbornly to his as it was all that remained of one of the tags on his chains when he awoke, deep under the seas. As one of the "Originals", Sclera spent ages in suspended animation with the incipient madness of isolation and imprisonment working on his mind. He was blessed with a genius-level intellect, however, and turned to logic, math, and feats of memorization to avoid losing his sanity -- a risk that may still be lurking just around the corner. When the Rising occurred, and the Originals freed themselves to form the Morgawr society, Sclera showed two very interesting characteristics. First, a genius for the problem-solving aspects of managing and leading, and second, a deep terror of being left alone. Sclera often uses the Morgawr's natural powers of mind control to ensure he is surrounded by followers -- and delicately cleanses them suspicion that they have been used as psychological crutches or living shields.</LocalizationPair>

Should be "stubborn". Should be "the", "their" or "them of the".

Line 10797:   <LocalizationPair Name="%UnitProfileSeaDemonsHero4Description">Like all Morgawr, Ploria is a heavily mutated and corrupted product of various ancient species from Auriga -- and perhaps even other worlds. In Ploria's case, however, one of the worst mutations is his unusual aggressiveness. A skilled hunter and killer, he will often attack those who disagree with him not only mentally - which is normal in a telepathic society - but physically, which is viewed as a terrible breach of protocol. Were it not for his usefulness as a warrior-assassin for the Morgawr, it is likely that he would long ago have been selected as an Aberrance and put down for his violent nature. He wears his aggressiveness with pride, not shame, and has declared that he will seek and slay one of every major life form on the planet. As a spirit of the dark and a hunter of sentient beings, it will likely not be long before he achieves this.</LocalizationPair>

Does not follow the double hyphen pattern ("--").

Line 10853:   <LocalizationPair Name="%FacilityResourceExtractor_Luxury13Description">Facilities, like this one that generates Hydromiel are platforms that provide bonuses and resource exploitation. You can never know how much will be exploited by the fortress.</LocalizationPair>

Missing a coma.

Line 10881:   <LocalizationPair Name="%FacilityUnique12Description">Full of furnace models, designs mining tools and machines, and explanations of transport processes, the ideas in this facility will greatly improve the production of strategic resources.</LocalizationPair>

Should be "designs of".

Lines 10887-10889:   <LocalizationPair Name="%UnitAbilitySeafaringDescription">#FFB43F#WORLD EFFECTS#REVERT#
   CANNOT DISEMBARK OR PARTICIPATE TO GROUND BATTLES
   MUST BE PLACED ON A WATER TILE</LocalizationPair>

Should likely be "IN".

Lines 11132-11133:   <LocalizationPair Name="%BattleEffectAddBurningAction1Description">#FFB43F#EFFECTS#REVERT#
   LOSSES 20% OF ITS LIFE \7770\ EVERY ROUND</LocalizationPair>

Should be "LOSES".

Line 11227:   <LocalizationPair Name="%ItemDustFocalStrategic12Description">This titanium- and glassteel-bound crystal crystal fires a strong cone of energy at enemy targets. Good quality.</LocalizationPair>
Line 11229:   <LocalizationPair Name="%ItemDustFocalStrategic34Description">This adamantian- and palladian-bound crystal crystal fires a powerful cone of energy at enemy targets. Great quality.</LocalizationPair>
Line 11231:   <LocalizationPair Name="%ItemDustFocalStrategic56Description">This mithrite- and hyperium-bound crystal crystal fires a devastating cone of energy at enemy targets. Legendary quality.</LocalizationPair>

The repeated word should be removed.

Line 11309:   <LocalizationPair Name="%ItemMarkOfTheDamnedStrategic36Description">An object of devotion derived from a jellyfish that is the most venomous creature on Auriga,  this totem confers agreat powers on the unit wearing it at the cost of rapid degeneration -- and eventual death.</LocalizationPair>

Double space. Should be "great". Should be "to".

Line 11350:   <LocalizationPair Name="%MainQuestSeaDemons-Chapter2Objective">The Morgawr must find peace their own way - by dominating others, not by trusting them. The first step is to increase the armies and give the Morgawr a good capability to attack. Next, fortresses must be taken. Weakness cannot be tolerated.</LocalizationPair>

Does not follow the double hyphen pattern ("--").

Lines 11373-11379:   <LocalizationPair Name="%MainQuestSeaDemons-Chapter4Description">Morgawr rest, and think. Air, food, water, shelter - these exist. But still too few Morgawr. Too many others.

Was hunted once; will be hunted again. Must happen, because history is a circle. But circles, like chains, can be broken. Even shattered.

No peace, no security, until Auriga is one people under one mind. Morgawr mind is a strong mind, but scarred by ages of confinement. Must be tested, developed, honed.

Morgawr must learn to control the things that live on land as well as those that live in the sea. Must apply the single mind of Morgawr to the weak, scattered consciousnesses of the landpeople.</LocalizationPair>

Does not follow the double hyphen pattern ("--").

Lines 11419-11427:   <LocalizationPair Name="%MainQuestSeaDemons-Chapter5Description">Morgawr feels something. It is out there. Limiting, controlling, defining. Keeping Morgawr mind under control, keeping it feeble. Free-but-chained.

The thing is an old thing, a thing of the Jailers. An evil thing. A thing that must be discovered, thwarted, destroyed before it can hobble the Morgawr mind.

Rage! Hatred! Old evils still exist, still haunt, still try to dominate.

No. Calm. Controlled. Thinking. Only Morgawr will dominate. Must learn of Jailers--their magic, tools, machines. Grow stronger. Grow smarter.

Start by collecting Dust and luxuries -- collecting power and strength.</LocalizationPair>

Missing space.
 

Line 11433:   <LocalizationPair Name="%MainQuestSeaDemons-Chapter5Outcome">Dust is magic, power. Resources also give powers, boost Morgawr, make them stronger.  Now Morgawr needs useful puppets. Jailers were smart. Easier sometimes to force others to do your work.</LocalizationPair>

Double space

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Line 11566:   <LocalizationPair Name="%SideQuestNavalTalk#0009Outcome">Your scheme is wildly successful; the luxuries were so welcome that they now have a holiday in your name - a name which they prefix with "Lord".</LocalizationPair>

Does not follow the double hyphen pattern ("--").

Line 11573 and 11584:   <LocalizationPair Name="%SideQuestNavalTalk#0010-Step1Tooltip">There are many ways to collect Dust - by moving population in a city, by selling things on the Marketplace, by exploring ruins, etc.</LocalizationPair>

Should be ":" or "--".

Line 11574:   <LocalizationPair Name="%SideQuestNavalTalk#0010-Step2">Lurah hopes to impress relatives with this success. Bring $ResourceAmount of $ResourceName to the leader of $SecondFortressName, located in $SecondFortressRegionName</LocalizationPair>

Missing period.

Line 11620:   <LocalizationPair Name="%SideQuestNavalTalk#0017Description">As you arrive at the fortress you interrupt an unusual ritual. The inhabitants are drinking and singing, celebrating their good fortune as they sit astride ancient sea trunks and chests. Sadly the have run low on Wine, and would be happy to invite you into their society if you acquire some.</LocalizationPair>

Should be "they". I also recommend taking a look on the capitalization of mechanical terms. Some items, such as resources, have a different capitalization rule when in lore and outside of lore, but this rule is often broken, either by mistake or by lack of normalization.

Line 11700:   <LocalizationPair Name="%SideQuestNavalTalk#0023Description">The inhabitants of this fortress have little respect for "dirtplodders" - those who live in cities. They refuse to have any dealings with you unless you can show that the adoration of your population is so great that they would be willing to risk their lives on the ever-changing seas.
Without near-fanatical followers, they scoff, the dirtplodders will run -- or panic and drown -- when they face war on the merciless ocean.</LocalizationPair>

Does not follow the double hyphen pattern ("--").

Line 11717:   <LocalizationPair Name="%SideQuestNavalTalk#0025Objective">Provide the fortress with what they need to build their ships. The inhabitants of the $InitialFortressName in $InitialFortressRegionName will then be glad to  trust you.</LocalizationPair>

Double space.

Line 11784:   <LocalizationPair Name="%SideQuestNavalTalk#0033Outcome">While some elements of the stories ring true, may more seen to be hyperbole or propoganda. How do you determine which is right? The fortress is willing to turn over control to you -- if you turn over the refugees to them. The good of the many must be served.</LocalizationPair>

Should be "many". Should be "propaganda".

Note about the Morgawr diplomatic lines: It's hard to tell if it is wrong or not, since these are very short sentences with, sometimes, undefined subjects. But I noticed some of them treat the Morgawr as a plural entity, while others treat them as a singular one. Take for instance: "It serves us", found in a few sentences, and compare it to "It serves me". This issue is also visible in the use of the possessive pronouns "our" and "my", where you can see sentences as "May it serve my intent" and "You may yet serve our intent". There is definitely a dissonance, one I hardly find to be on purpose, since it would not fit with their questline. I won't be delineating them here, since goes beyond a "typo" (and I can't be arsed to check every minimal detail).

Note about capitalization: As I mentioned on a previous post, some capitalization issues. Sometimes the game concepts (war, cold war, peace etc.) will show up capitalized, others they won't.

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Line 12014:   <LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionWarToTruceSigned_SeaDemons">I, the Morgawr, are accepting your proposal to end this #F3EAD8#war#REVERT# with a #F3EAD8#truce#REVERT# .</LocalizationPair>

Extra space.

Line 12029:   <LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionAllianceToWarAcknowledged_SeaDemons">I, the Morgawr,  are no longer #F3EAD8#allies#REVERT#. Your meaningless betrayal will see you die in #F3EAD8#war#REVERT#.</LocalizationPair>

Double space.

Line 12082:   <LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionMyEmpireCitiesTakenFeedbackNeutral_Occurrence1_SeaDemons">You have #F3EAD8#taken my city#REVERT#.  I, the Morgawr, are unlikely to forget.</LocalizationPair>

Double space.

Line 12083:   <LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionMyEmpireLeadMilitaryPowerFeedbackNeutral_Occurrence1_SeaDemons">It is in your interest to note that I, the Morgawr, despise your  #F3EAD8#weak military#REVERT#.</LocalizationPair>

Double space.

Line 12084:   <LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionOtherEmpireLeadMilitaryPowerFeedbackNeutral_Occurrence1_SeaDemons">I, the Morgawr, note  #F3EAD8#your great military power#REVERT#. But we have waited long, and are patient.</LocalizationPair>

Double space.

Line 12116:   <LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionSpySpottedFeedbackPositive_Occurrence1_SeaDemons">I, the Morgawr, have identified #F3EAD8#your spy#REVERT# n our city. It amuses me.</LocalizationPair>

Should be "in".

Line 12122:   <LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionPrisonerRecoverySigned _SeaDemons">I, Morgawr, are pleased to be whole again. Your help was useful.</LocalizationPair>

Should be "the Morgawr".

Line 12129:   <LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionEliminatedEnemyFeedbackPositive_Occurrence1_BrokenLords">Your #F3EAD8#elimination of our enemy#REVERT# leaves us in youir debt.</LocalizationPair>

Should be "your".

Line 12134:   <LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionEliminatedAllyFeedbackNegative_Occurrence1_BrokenLords">The #F3EAD8#elimination of our ally#REVERT# is an act of bloodthirsty savagery!.</LocalizationPair>

Unnecessary final dot.

Line 12140:   <LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionEliminatedAcquaintanceFeedbackNegative_Occurrence1_BrokenLords">We see only the act of a savage in the #F3EAD8#elimination of a neighbor#REVERT#!.</LocalizationPair>

Unnecessary final dot.

Line 12150:   <LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionAtWarWithMyAllyFeedbackPositive_Occurrence1_BrokenLords">We have, of course, noted that you are #F3EAD8#war with our ally#REVERT#. Rest assured, it was not an ally we were fond of.</LocalizationPair>

Should be "are at #F3EAD8#war".

Line 12153:   <LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionBetrayedYourAllyFeedbackPositive_Occurrence1_BrokenLords">You have #F3EAD8# betrayed our ally#REVERT#! Tacky, but understandable.</LocalizationPair>

Line 12154:   <LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionBetrayedYourAllyFeedbackNeutral_Occurrence1_BrokenLords">You #F3EAD8# betrayed our ally#REVERT#! In questions of honor, your honor is questionable.</LocalizationPair>

Line 12155:   <LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionBetrayedYourAllyFeedbackNegative_Occurrence1_BrokenLords">We can think of no honorable reason for you to have #F3EAD8# betrayed our ally#REVERT#, you uncouth villains.</LocalizationPair>

Line 12156:   <LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionBetrayedYourFriendFeedbackPositive_Occurrence1_BrokenLords">Noting that you have #F3EAD8# betrayed our friend#REVERT#, we feel we may well have done the same.</LocalizationPair>
Line 12157:   <LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionBetrayedYourFriendFeedbackNeutral_Occurrence1_BrokenLords">It is not a welcome act to see you #F3EAD8# betray our friend#REVERT#.</LocalizationPair>
Line 12158:   <LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionBetrayedYourFriendFeedbackNegative_Occurrence1_BrokenLords">Dishonorable curs! You have #F3EAD8# betrayed our friend#REVERT#!</LocalizationPair>

Line 12215:   <LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionBetrayedYourAllyFeedbackPositive_Occurrence1_RageWizards">You have #F3EAD8# betrayed our ally#REVERT#, but this ally needed to be winnowed.</LocalizationPair>

Line 12216:   <LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionBetrayedYourAllyFeedbackNeutral_Occurrence1_RageWizards">We trust you little and watch you more, now that you have #F3EAD8# betrayed our ally#REVERT#.</LocalizationPair>

Line 12217:   <LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionBetrayedYourAllyFeedbackNegative_Occurrence1_RageWizards">Beware our wrath; you have #F3EAD8# betrayed our ally#REVERT#.</LocalizationPair>

Extra space.

Line 12159:   <LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionMyEmpireLeadNavalMilitaryPowerFeedbackPositive_Occurrence1_BrokenLords">We look upon you with a certain lofty superiority, as we #F3EAD8#most powerful navy#REVERT#.</LocalizationPair>

Should be "we have the #F3EAD8#most".

Line 12177:   <LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionMyEmpireFortressesTakenDuringColdWarFeedbackPositive_Occurrence1_BrokenLords">Let us say, for the moment, that your #F3EAD8#taking our fortress#REVERT# was more in the nature of a gift,</LocalizationPair>

Should be a period.

Line 12205:   <LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionCityTakenFromEnemyFeedbackNegative_Occurrence1_RageWizards">#F3EAD8#Taken an enemy city#REVERT# was foolish and irreverent. There must be atonement.</LocalizationPair>

Should be "Taking".

Line 12212:   <LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionAtWarWithMyAllyFeedbackPositive_Occurrence1_RageWizards">You are #F3EAD8#war with our ally#REVERT#, but we feel this ally lacks rigor. Proceed.</LocalizationPair>

Should be "are #F3EAD8#at war".

Line 12343:   <LocalizationPair Name="DiplomaticInteractionBetrayedYourFriendFeedbackNeutral_Occurrence1_MadFairies">Why have have you #F3EAD8# betrayed our friend#REVERT#. We do not see gain, or growth, or glory in this.</LocalizationPair>

Extra "have". Extra space. Should be "?".

Line 12883:   <LocalizationPair Name="%DiplomaticInteractionVillageConvertedFeedbackNeutral_Occu