Typos!

PurpleXVI

Newcomer

10 years ago

Oct 3, 2014, 4:21:28 PM

An unfortunate shortening of "Destructive Analysis"

I think this one might want a review, unless you want to relabel it as a feature for launch in Japan.

Mobyduck

Forgotten

Official Unofficial Translator.

Mobyduck

Forgotten

16 800g2g pts

10 years ago

Oct 6, 2014, 10:00:04 PM

Since I've been spending my free time working with the game strings, I will start posting any typos I find there here. I will update this post with any further typos.

Name="%HeroAssignImpossibleEmptyAcamedyDescription">Cannot a assign a hero as your empire controls no hero at all.

Name="%HeroUnassignImpossibleSiege">This hero cannot be unassigned as the city is under siege – Should have a period at the end.

Name="%NotificationVillageConvertedDescription">A village in the region of {0} has been converted by the empire of {1} - Double space in "converted by".

Name="%DiplomaticTermInvalidDescription">This term is not longer valid, as it cannot be fulfilled anymore.

Name="%DiplomaticAbilityMutualCloseBordersDescription">This empire and yours have closed the frontiers to each other – Should have a period at the end.

synra

Newcomer

synra

Newcomer

10 years ago

Oct 7, 2014, 10:05:18 PM

See picture, heh. Awkward.

DEVSlowhands

Literary Dev

"Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things that you didn't do than by the ones you did do."

DEVSlowhands

Literary Dev

39 800g2g pts

10 years ago

Oct 8, 2014, 8:34:34 PM

Thanks for all of these! We're working on getting them into an upcoming update.

Antistone

Ardent

Antistone

Ardent

10 years ago

Oct 11, 2014, 5:41:44 PM

In the description of the "Ice Sculptures" anomaly:

"The sonic properties of these cathedrals of vaulting ice is remarkable..."

The word "is" should be "are" (the subject is "properties", which is plural).

Mobyduck

Forgotten

Official Unofficial Translator.

Mobyduck

Forgotten

16 800g2g pts

10 years ago

Oct 12, 2014, 1:56:45 AM

Name="%UnitRageWizardsWitchDescription">It is said the very air in the vicinity cools as an Ateshi Zealot conjures a rain of fire to hurl onto the enemy's ranks, but this is more preferable to being in the burning firing line. – Missing the bolded word "is".

Name="%CityImprovementFood0Description">Seeds of domesticated plants are stored for sowing, making crops more reliable and increasing the amount of Food produced. – Double space between "sowing, making".

Antistone

Ardent

Antistone

Ardent

10 years ago

Oct 12, 2014, 5:37:21 AM

In the description of the quest sword "The Shard of Icarael":

"The beauty and keeness of the weapon have ledmany to speculate..."

Missing a space between "led" and "many".

Antistone

Ardent

Antistone

Ardent

10 years ago

Oct 12, 2014, 9:55:48 PM

Faction description for the Broken Lords says "Main Victory Type: Conquest"

"Conquest" is not listed as one of the victory types in the advanced settings screen. Is this supposed to be "Supremacy"?

Christof2003

Newcomer

Christof2003

Newcomer

10 years ago

Oct 13, 2014, 6:53:16 PM

NullReferenceException: Object reference not set to an instance of an object

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Alteration_Projectile.ComputeSourceAndTargetPawns ()

Alteration_Projectile.HandleEvent (Amplitude.StaticString eventName, System.Object[] parameters)

AlterationController.NotifyEvent (Amplitude.StaticString eventName, System.Object[] parameters)

Alteration_AnimationEvent.HandleEvent (Amplitude.StaticString eventName, System.Object[] parameters)

AlterationController.NotifyEvent (Amplitude.StaticString eventName, System.Object[] parameters)

MecanimEventEmitter.Update ()

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V1.0.2 S3 (32-bit)

Antistone

Ardent

Antistone

Ardent

10 years ago

Oct 15, 2014, 5:04:43 AM

Ardent Mages quest #4 intro text

"...I walk from the castellum to the chamber where my brothers scepter hangs..."

You're missing an apostrophe--"brothers" should be "brother's"

Antistone

Ardent

Antistone

Ardent

10 years ago

Oct 19, 2014, 7:29:10 PM

Ardent Mages quest #7 intro text

"...Our distant kin with whom we shared the beauty of the plains with so many ages ago?...

Too many "with"s.

Antistone

Ardent

Antistone

Ardent

10 years ago

Oct 20, 2014, 12:33:15 AM

Ardent Mages quest #8 intro text:

"...as penance for their brothers and sisters' sins...."

Missing an apostrophe at the end of "brothers".

Fersoltil

Newcomer

Fersoltil

Newcomer

10 years ago

Oct 29, 2014, 2:59:05 AM

In the popup for Glassteel, it says "chymical". Should be "chemical" unless it's a game lore thing.

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=333377866

Fersoltil

Newcomer

Fersoltil

Newcomer

10 years ago

Oct 31, 2014, 5:23:49 PM

In the Vaulter's quest "3. Mission Centre" briefing the text says "overun" which should be "overrun".

http://i.imgur.com/wcqszG4.png

ralrom

Newcomer

ralrom

Newcomer

10 years ago

Nov 5, 2014, 8:43:28 PM

On the loading screen:

Waiting for serveur

Connecting to server

serveur is spelled in french instead of english. on the next line it's spelled the correct way

Fersoltil

Newcomer

Fersoltil

Newcomer

10 years ago

Nov 6, 2014, 11:02:52 AM

Era 5 Tech Description for "Marvelous Alloys"

The fluff text says "All three are powerful" but it should say "Both are powerful" as there are only two connected ressources.

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=337554159

NihilAeternus

Cosmonaut

Consumer of worlds, seeker of knowledge.

NihilAeternus

Cosmonaut

30 400g2g pts

10 years ago

Nov 11, 2014, 11:37:29 PM

Steam achievement:

"Press the Flesh

Play a game in multiplayer with one another human at least."

should probably be

"...with one other human at least."

nnwork

Dust Fanatic

nnwork

Dust Fanatic

26 300g2g pts

10 years ago

Nov 16, 2014, 3:36:42 PM

Hero: Tinu the Chosen II has his name written as "Tinu the ChosenII".
Several popups are missing a dot from the end:

[LIST=1]

Your city was captured.

Idle city construction.

Pillar effect ended; both from the popup and the tooltip of the notification in the list on the right.

[/LIST]

These aren't typos exactly but I reckon this is still the best place to put these.

Cargo docks: Reads "can only be built once per city" Text could be removed as every building is built once bar resource extractors?
Conscription Center, Era II: Reads "Effect: +40 xp when recruiting a unit on units" sounds confusing. Replace with "new units start with +40 xp".
Capacity, Dust Care: Reads "can be healed with dust" - should read "can be healed only with dust" for clarity.
Capacity, Increased Fire: level 3 reads "+30% attack on unit" - should read "+75% attack on unit" (or tone the value down).
Capacity, Low Damage: Reduces attack value. Should be renamed to "Low Attack" for clarity or affect the damage value instead.
Hero skills, Thrifty: Reads "-50% on military upkeep" - should read "-50% on garrisoned military upkeep" for clarity.
Negotiations screen: If a rival has closed borders the tooltip on his treaty offer of 'open borders' reads "a step further than Peace, you can now move freely in each others' territories." - it implies Peace status is a pre-requisite for open borders?
The new halloween quest: There's a slip in the tooltip about obtaining luxury resource. It describes the needed Redsang as "$luxuryresource" when you mouseover the quest objective.

Nirual

Newcomer