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[EL] Faction Creation Competition - Quest 2

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10 years ago
May 27, 2014, 12:33:10 AM
In my above post, some of my pictures are too small and I am unable to edit them. Here are bigger versions:























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10 years ago
May 27, 2014, 12:40:02 AM
I like the city Blitz. Using minecraft is something I never would've thought of and it conveys the idea greatly.
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10 years ago
May 27, 2014, 7:59:26 AM
First of all I do not claim any rights of the posted images. Those belong to their original creators.

The images are just here to illustrate my ideas. (The exception is obviously the one with the nyan cat lol^^)



I decided after all, to make a proposal despite being not able to draw something. After the Devs made clear that anyone could participate.

I hope I can compensate this with more detailed lore background especially considering my Hero biography in which i put a lot of work into. I hope that others will give my thoughts a read too.



Hero biography The Fable of the Swordbearer a short story:



The whole Thread

Chapter 2

Chapter 3



Table of Content:



Hero description (top of the entry)

Units (just scroll a bit down)

City (at the bottom of the entry)



You're weak, just like the rest of your people!

You do not deserve to exist in this world.

I am the blade of the bloody mist.

And I will end you all!

-Naenra the Swordbearer





Naenra the Swordbearer:





Hero description:



Naenra was a female Wild Walker Offshoot. She always was even-tempered, smart like a fox, and deadly as a snake the name "Naenra" in the ancient language of the Wild Walkers meaning "shadow." She was an fierce fighter who demonstrated an extreme loyalty to the Cult and her Master "Balmung the first Swordbearer".When She was at a young age she was normally armed with a Katana and 2 hidden blades in her sleeves . She was a tough opponent when fending off enemies and also a good preacher.



Before taking the heritage of being the "Swordbearer" Naenra was a orphan slave. she was forced to fight other slaves as part of the entertainment program of the raiders, who killed her tribe and captured her, but she survived and succeed in her fights to stay alive for the day she would take revenge on everyone who did her wrong. A former acolyte of the Unspoken and the bearer of the ever bleeding Blade named Balmung assisted in her escape from her tormentors by killing the entire slaver camp in a blink of an eye . He dedicated his life to protect her as his new apprentice and she dedicated her life to the Cult and to the eternal end of the gods.



Naenra and Balmung eventually settled in many cities and villages in the several hideouts the cult had all over the planet. She became a traveling companion to her master. He taught her to use magic creatively in battle and made her one of the most fearsome swordmaidens in the history of Auriga and she gave him the love of a daughter giving his by the sword utterly damaged mind more or less stable. After eleven years of training. Nanrea was allowed to participate in the burial ritual which was the second most sacred ceremony in the Cult and took place in the prechamber of the Queen herself. During this ritual the Tempel of the Cult suffered a devastating ambush attack and vital for the Cult OMCETS would have been nearly all killed. Nanrea was the one who averted greater harm from to Cult but her Master Balmung gave his life in Battle to save her and live with his last words before his end he made her heiress of the ever bleeding blade. A living blade forged and enchanted by the Unspoken itself, half organic half...something else. The magical Power of the Dust is so strong that it is always covered in a red glowing mist of Dust which brought it its name. In the Aftermath she was declared the youngest high priest in the history of the cult and given the honorary title "Princess of the eternal End". "Princess" a title her Master gave her already a long time ago, at the day he freed her from slavery so many years ago.



UNITS:



Harbingers:



They can be distinguished by simple robes adorned with the symbol of the End, ornate tattoos on various parts of their faces and a tall staff



In their view, Harbingers have been given the secrets of the Auriga by the Unspoken to spread the word of their godliness. Physiologically, the Dust has given them psionic abilities similar to magic. They possess considerable telekinetic abilities, enabling them to choke and kill, manipulate the wind or pin someone to the ground.



Teir face is a almost opaque texture, with deep, dark scarlet eyes set into slits, like a cat's gleaming in the dark.They can usually be seen wearing their black hooded cloak that always covers their face.



Harbingers can be recruited from all species.









Synthetic Zealots:



Zealots are the metal synthethics created by the Endless that are found all over Auriga. They were created as mindless servitors and act out a single role without question. However, there is said to be consciousness and emotions behind their empty, mechanical eyes. The Zealots will always fulfil their duties, whatever the costs.



They are the artificial constructs built by the false gods hat he used to observe the inhabitants of Auriga The zealots in form and function, are modeled after an unknown two-legged species. They are about twice as large as an average vaulter and at their extremities large replaceable blades and other extraordinary melee weapons attached. In the face of a zealot often are one or more glowing eyes.









Fallen Seraphim:



They live by Dust, the tool of the Endless. The broken rulers are miserable leper for the cult. And they did not even realize that they are cursed ... If they ever understand and accept the cult can live with them, but so are as yet very great animosity.

Interestingly, if a broken Lord should join the cult, and allow the queen to them a possible future without hunger. Genuine compassion does not have the cultists, but they work with the tools that promise them victory over the gods, no matter how disgusting or hateful they are to them.



Like Broken Lords are a crippled people that exist only as spirits wrapped in their great suits of Dust-enhanced armor. But every one of the converted Lords goes through a purification ritual. Then it seems they change entirely by the influence of the queen giving the former Broken Lord enormous power. Often, the individual pieces of armor of the fallen Seraphim are no longer connected to each other and the consistency of their Dust cloud far stronger. This grant them unreached mobility on the battlefield. They can hover and fly at low heights with high speed.









Behemoth:

(yes thats a "Legion" reference ^^)

Behemoths are soulless fusions of decaying flesh, bones and metal, twisted and mostly ruined by damage inflicted over the centuries . But despite the large damage of that robotic relic of the past one of those abominations under the control of the queen can change the tides of war . Behemoths have a steel plate armor, metal-cutting claws and long cybernetic tails armed with a „spike“ projectile weapon.



The main reactor is actually their "Heart" of the Vessels using a hybrid technology of organic cell metabolism in combination with nanoid Antimatter / Matter fusions. Which cause a light wavelength range of 380-450 nm Which gives them to most biological visual sensors (eyes) a blue glowing around their center and larger veins between the different chitin armor plates.



They have up to 12 glowing eyes a Sting, armed arms and their eight limbs are perfect for ending the lives of the infidels.







A Behemoth hunting a wild nyan cat on Auriga





City:



I imagine that the Tempel of the Cult contains

-large petrified forests,

-gothic architecture,

-houses made out of obsidian,

-european cathedrals,

-graet monolith/obelisk as the main core of the Tempel

-mixing all those things up with a good portion of Steampunk.



The Tempel should be a home to every race in the known world. A melting pot where you are likely to bump in Wild Walkers,Vaulters, Drakkens or any possible mix of the aforementioned. There shouldnt be a place where gears gennot be seen turning and winding. Tufts of white steam shall fill the air, making clouds so that it is often raining.You shall not walk five feet without hearing the release of pressure.












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10 years ago
May 27, 2014, 10:55:21 AM
Judging from your edit, Sovereign, you submitted something after the deadline, but it doesn't matter as it was our fault (long creative meeting!). smiley: smile Anyway, we closed the thread: thank you all for the submissions. smiley: approval
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